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I think Martin is my favorite character. I wonder what's up with him, though? I'm worried he might have somehow been turned into a vampire, because he's having such an ...

Poor Rick! He's getting a lot of excitement lately. Also, I love how the snake talks: "Wherefore is rabbit fights?"

Thanks so much! You really seem to understand the story, and your suggestions are specific, helpful, and encouraging. You're a great reviewer!

Thanks. With the "king" thing, that's the word they use in the anime (Saiunkoku is one of only 3 animes I watch in English because I like the English voices ...

Curiouser and curiouser...

Well, this has taken an unexpected turn for the fantastical. :)

Oh no! I'm sorry! I meant for this not to be a review. Since I accidentally called it a review, I should say a few more things about the chapter. ...

It is third-person omniscient, actually, which is my favorite POV. My second-favorite is first person, and I occasionally use third-person limited. It seemed really odd that he would suddenly yell ...

Oh crap , legality issues? But what am I going to do about the scenes where Kaelin happens to be present in scenes that are actually part of the show? ...

Thanks! But so you know, "Kaelin" is the only original name here, since this is a fanfiction of a show called "Once Upon a Time".

Sorry, DOCTOR Whale. :P

I'm afraid I didn't invest in a subplot about Mr. Whale, though he did get his own episode in the series. His background is pretty disconnected to the whole story ...

Thanks!!! This is extremely helpful. And yeah, I totally did not know Raphael Sbarge was in his fifties until I was almost done writing this story. I assumed Archie's around ...

The idea comes from the notion that you have to somehow be constantly recognizing and confessing your sins to be continually re-earning Christ's forgiveness--as though somehow God did not already ...

Whoever tells people that suicide means damnation has no understanding of the grace of God.