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Hi, Zeus! Thanks for all the constructive criticism! I just wanted to let you know that, in posting my Jigoku Shoujo stories, I'm posting completed works. So don't feel like ...

By the way, pleeeaaase continue switching the point-of-view between Poppy and Juniper. It's not confusing to me at all, and I know that if you only used one point-of-view it ...

I think it's interesting that you found this story very hard to connect to while I felt pulled into the world immediately, sympathizing deeply with the characters. Is it our ...

Thanks! I know I've had a long-standing problem with run-on sentences, probably because I was reading a lot of Dostoyevsky when I first started writing. Talk about run-ons! I'll keep ...

Thanks for the review! I've really tried to keep the tone and style of the actual anime, since I like it for the same reasons that you do. It's like ...

These characters are so real. I don't know. They're so real and so unreal at the same time. XD

Oops! I think this double-posted. I was having some technical trouble...Sorry!

Wow, now I'm even more curious. How could there be a "parallel planet" in the same universe? In fact, you seem to have implied that there are many of these ...

Funny thing about the structure of this story...the Prologue only ties with the Epilogue, like bookends, with two different stories in between. But they all have to do with Jigoku ...