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Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. It's been a long time since I've looked at this story, so I think it'll be fun to see your reactions to it.

Thanks for responding so nicely to my complaining. It wasn't really meant to be a very detailed poem. There's a lot of complex feelings and personal memories behind the words ...

I'm sorry; it wasn't nice of me to respond that way. I guess I just shouldn't post such personal stuff on YWS because other people aren't meant to really understand ...

Well maybe I'm not an aspiring poet and maybe I just posted this because it came to me while I was looking up at the moon last night and maybe ...

Nope, can't take out the mill. He's my favorite character in the original fairy tale: "The Stars in the Sky". This chapter and the next are the closest to the ...

Thanks! Funny thing is, I think the therapy stuff will get more accurate later. The thing with this story is that I actually started writing it to try to work ...

Yay, I have a Psychology consultant now. :D Thanks for all the insights. I know very little about counseling right now, thought I would like to study and understand it ...

Thanks for a very dynamic review! Yes, Belle lost her memories in the original series, which this Once Upon a Time fanfiction runs parallel to. I'm pretty sure I'd mentioned ...

Thanks! That was really encouraging. :)

Ah, naw, you're not the Heather I was thinking of (who changes names frequently), but thanks anyway. :) :P

Wait, what? Heather? Wow, thanks for the review! It's very helpful and specific!

Also, by "perfect", I meant "exactly as I intended", and I also meant it could happen to "anyone", and I'd wish that kind of conversion on anyone, though it doesn't ...

My song "Hesed" (in my songs folder) is kind of a companion to this story, which I had originally also called "Hesed". I wanted to paste the link here, but ...

I believe the conversion is perfect, not weak, and something that could happen to you. It's not a story of a man who finds solutions to his problems, or comfort ...

Thanks, this was really helpful. If you're going to read Part 3, please read Part 1 first! It's a short story that I had to break into three parts for ...