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Oh my gawsh, your characters are so cute.

D: Are you only posting half of Chapter 1, and Chapter 4, and Chapter 6 because you plan to publish this and only give us a taste of the story. ...

Hi, Ats! Sorry, I couldn't find part 1/2, so I'm kind of jumping in with no background. I like Lav already, with her style of wearing two shirts over each ...

My goodness, this story caught my emotions immediately. At first, there was just an overpoweringly surreal atmosphere, as Poppy came to recognize and experience her existence. It brought me into ...

A pickup truck? I somehow didn't expect Dev to be riding a monster pickup truck, but okay. XD Elijah sounds like he's living a pretty...oh, I don't know what word ...

Hah, I loved when Elijah was paranoid for an instant that Morgan was an alien too. It really shows how tense he is after that incident. I like the bar ...

Wow, Andi has a temper. Oops! So Elijah's a problem now? What made Mavon decide that the best course of action would be to have him meet Andi? Did she ...

My heart leaped at: "Dress nice, or Andi will throw a fit." I'm so excited~~ I suppose Mavon put on her show of incredulity for the sake of other people ...

I love the relaxed atmosphere that's created at the beginning of this chapter. You immediately see that they aren't seated around the dining room table having a formal meal: Luke's ...

I love Mavon! Such a colorful character. It's the little details that make her interesting, like the mint bubblegum. And the way she talks. Of course, the more major details, ...

This has such beautiful and vivid descriptions. You write about the neighborhood in Orlando as if you've been there. I also really felt the emotion there when Rem switched from ...

What?! WHAAAAT?!! Ace got shot? I didn't realize that was what happened in the last sentence of the first part! I was. Extremely shocked by that. I've only read the ...

Oh man, I love it. Ace is so real. I like how unusual and striking Naomi is--and of course, I'm curious to find out what it was that got her ...

Honestly, I'm a little annoyed that Dorothy suddenly became a not-at-all-formidable opponent when in the last chapter, he was extremely threatening. I'm also annoyed that Jason didn't carry out his ...

Wait...supernova? Did you mean to use that word? Is their sun actually supernova-ing, or is it just a sun filtered through a weird atmosphere? Well, I guess it doesn't matter ...