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Thanks! :)

Thanks again, Elder! I'll look into that. :)

Thank you for the beautiful review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wrote this for a writing tournament on here, and the theme was "What they found in the notebook". ...

That all makes sense. No problem! I'm loving this whole thing. :)

Okay. Thanks. I had the feeling that it was symbolic, it was just quite vague so I was struggling to make it out. Thanks for sharing!

Yay!

It should. People have posted stories that are five times longer than this. What's the problem? Is it showing an error?

Okay... XD

Thanks Snoink! That's an interesting suggestion. Perhaps I'll try to use some music vocab in an edited version or another poem. :)

Thanks!

Is that a good thing? :)

Thanks Tay! However, because this is freestyle, I have no reason to make a set rhythm. Perhaps next time, critique on the content? Thanks!

*noms cookie* Thanks!

Thanks!

Thanks!