Sonder

Oh, interesting suggestions! I'll definitely look into that. Thanks for the review! :)

Lack of capitalization was intentional. Artist choice! :)

Every poem has a meaning. Otherwise, it's useless. This poem was about how I wish I could express myself and put my emotions into words, but how it's very hard ...

Thank you. :)

Thanks. :)

No problem! And ahhh, that makes a lot more sense that she's not his teacher. XD I'm so glad you plan to continue! And that was very thoughtful of you, ...

Sis, this is lovely. When I get out of my funk, I want to review this.

This poem is about depression, and even though I don't have it, it runs in my family and I sometimes experience low episodes, so I wanted to convey that feeling. ...

This poem is about depression, and even though I don't have it, it runs in my family and I sometimes experience low episodes, so I wanted to convey that feeling. ...

I thought I responded to this, but I just looked back and realized I hadn't. >.< Sorry. In response, thank you so much for this review. The suggestions are immensely ...

Thanks for the review. It means a lot. :)

Ugh sorry for all the typos, my autocorrect is an idiot.

Many of your comments are on stylistic choices that I made on purpose. This poem is about depression, I just used Friday as a vehicle for it. The "to many ...

This poem is about depression. Not everything is literal. Thanks for the review.

This poem is based on my family's current struggle with adopting a boy with a major heart defect from China, so that's what I was drawing from. Thanks for the ...