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beautifully and wonderfully made

  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Fonts Have Stories Too

    No prob! :)

    Feb 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Fonts Have Stories Too

    Aw, that stinks! :/ It's a good idea for any future formatting-based pieces though!

    Feb 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Fonts Have Stories Too

    Cute piece! I've seen your response to other people about your original fonts piece and one thing you could do is take a screenshot of your piece and post it ...

    Feb 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Tootsie Pop Commercial

    Oh my gosh. I adore this. It was delicious to read, thanks for sharing.

    Jan 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: dust

    Beautifully crafted, as well as painful, because I identify with every word. Thank you for sharing.

    Nov 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: dear trump

    question: am I not seeing this in the spotlight cuz it's rated for language? Also 8/8 gr8 m8 would r8 again A+++

    Nov 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: depleted

    Thanks for the review! :)

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: depleted

    Thanks. :)

    Oct 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: depleted

    Thanks for the review, Lumi. I agree, the formatting failed me, but I couldn't figure out how to upload my formatted poem; YWS kept rejecting the files. I'll try your ...

    Oct 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Progeny : Chapter 31

    Oh, okay. I did forget Anna-Lynn, obviously, so sorry about that. No, you can't avoid offending everyone, but I just wanted to point out that foster families already have a ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: mottle-skinned girl

    Gotcha. I get that too. Although last time I wrote a poem about the hospital and specifically stated so, someone said that it was obvious enough that I shouldn't say ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: mottle-skinned girl

    Thanks for the review. As I said to Rosie, I hope this didn't offend or discourage. I'll get to revising soon.

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: mottle-skinned girl

    Hmm, okay. Thanks for the review. I did not mean for it to come off that way, so I apologize. I never meant to encourage cultural norms of separation but ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Progeny: Chapter 30

    Oh, it's totally fine! I suspected life went crazy, happens to all of us. :) I'm happy to keep reading! I like the characters and it keeps me reviewing (I'm ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Falling In Love With A Jesuit Vampire At Her Aunt's House! What??? Absolute Craziness!!!/True Love!! (Parts 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5 please read!)

    i think your a fraud mister. real vamps sparkle, evry1 nos that. this isnt real 3/10 not impressed

    Aug 24, 2016


You cannot have a positive life and a negative mind.
— Joyce Meyer