Someguy

Not bad. I really enjoyed it. —and I catch a fleeting glimpse, through the emptiness of a hall, where the souls of emperors have been framed— a ghost of a ...

I was good. I just feel something was missing in it. It was good,but a poem is suppose to hook you from the beginning till the end. This didn't have ...

You can add more. It is just a basic description. I was waiting for more. So what if I’m not preppy? What’s popularity got to do with anything? Why can’t ...

I think it was nice. It is a good beginning. Just one thing. You need to make paragraphs. This is really important. Makeas it easier to read. Anyway I think ...

It's revenge against men! AND IT'S YOUR FAUALT! Very nice. Blonde haired beauty; cherry red lips, Entertains the chauvinistic, For the pleasure; no the money. Scamming and scheming. It tells ...

It is nice,but this isn't poetry. It is like a letter. :( Cheer up :D

Did you know that 'bitches are women. The first verse is about a bitch I know, Who lost his job, so he sucks dick for dough. Rick you a bitch ...

It was daughter. Oh boy, he is in alot of @#$. No offence. I think it was good. You need to make paragraphs. It helps alot. I think it was ...

It was nice. Steamy :lol: :lol: I think there could be a little more work done. My adrenaline was pure now. It pumped fast and it pumped heavy. I got ...

It is very good. I liked was very deep. A rock in a desert, Reliable and steady Yet never noticed until needed? I don't understand the last line. :? Or ...

Very is great. I have an Image in front of me.I can also make my own beat. teller, teller, tell me a tale of love and fear and duty i ...

I have to hurry so this is it. It is good,but a bit long. In the evening of all Time, When the old men rhyme, When the evil men place ...

It is good. I liked it. When all hope is gone, I'll come! When your heart is in two, I'll come! When you look for me, I'll come! And when ...

I think it was good. There is still a bit of work to do, but really good. And while those battles Are fought with words, The real war will begin ...

For something like this, I think you deserve a bow from the Queen. :lol: This is as inevitable As the sun rises in the east. I have to agree with ...