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Re: cheating
Hello, Sohpiee here :) I like this poem very emotional and intreging But I cant help but saying that this would seem better with some puncuation :) But still i ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: A Green Baby named Who? chapter two.
LOL!, yayyy more me xD A error that i saw was with this sentence "Ellie" Teneall began as she took a bite of her apple. "Do you really not a ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: A Bisexual High School Love Quadrilateral
I loved reading this, made me feel sad inside but not in a bad way, I like how its all in a good depth of emotion. I find this very ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: A Body Shot
I rather like this aswell, you can kinda picture what happening although it does kind of get a bit confusing in some parts, like wear the man is on the ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Total Sappy Mush
To Snoink, I rather like this short story, find it cute :) Cliche's shouldnt matter, if the cliche is really how you feel, the same goes with loving someone. shouldnt ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Fluffy
This poem make me think of my puppy, because he is a maltese shitzu so he's covered with fur, we nick-named him fluffy puppy, I realy like this poem its ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: The pain I give myself
I actualy really love this poem, even thought its about your pet (I hope the bird R.I.P) I feel like I can relate to it aswell, I find this incredibly ...
Oct 8, 2010
