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Re: Luke
Aw, that was just sad, in the way I understand this story, it was like Cass loves Luke but it is kind of forbidden because of what happens to the ...
Jul 15, 2012 -
Re: Bugs Bunny
Wow! This is great :DD HAHA! So, you are some kind of a song composer eh? Well, first of all, the lyrics are long, so I assume this kind of ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: How Clove Met Kay
Hey there, Reason! Just as I said on my first review for you, I'll be reviewing this one! Well, I understand that this chapter can be a little different to ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Endless Night (1)
I will be starting off by saying that I just noticed that most of the time, you write in fragments and not sentences. For example: "The worrisome thin body fought ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Twilight the True Story: (By My Accounts)
HAHAHA! Okay, set aside my meticulous comments about punctuation marks and all, I almost died laughing at this one! HAHAHA! - oooh, how I love parodies. :D
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Of Love and Gods-Prologue
:D Hi there! Just out here to say something. I hope this will be helpful. ____________ Since, this is only the Prologue, it might really be a bit confusing for ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Jareth's wrath
Hello there! First of all, I am just wondering why you don't use proper capitalization. It's just that, even if there's periods there, I can't clearly identify if I am ...
Jul 14, 2012
