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Snowmane

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Horror Re: 911-prologue

    This was a very interesting read; definitely suspenseful and catching. However, it wasn’t much more than that. There was only dialogue. There were no description, no *content*. It was almost ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Mermaid's Tear

    This was really, really good. There is nothing bad I have to say about it. The only small thing I think would make it better is if you moved the ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Love and Lies: Chapter One

    This was an interesting read. Unfortunately I can’t say that it was amazing. There are numerous writing and style critics that I have with it, some of which are personal. ...

    Apr 3, 2013


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