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Re: Chapter one. We are born sinners
Hi! Yes, this is a review... The most obvious problem with this title is that there is no story to go with it. Where did it go?? Not to tell ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: On the Edge Chapter one
Hey thanks, I know my story is still confusing but if you want, you can PM me and I can answer those questions.Thank you for the suggestions.
Jun 13, 2015 -
Re: All about that bass fishing (a parody of all about that bass)
Complete agreement with the others: This is pretty entertaining! :D don't worry about the copyright this parody isn't close enough to the original
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: On the Edge Chapter one
No it's okay, anything is fine
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: On the Edge
I'm glad you liked it, it does need some proof reading. I appreciate your advice.
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: On the Edge
Thanks I'll fix those
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Protectors of Gantaro: Chapter Two
Very short... there's no problem with that but is that all you would put in a chapter? So far this piece of writing has the least amount of errors in ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: On the Edge
yeah thanks Artstyx, that's what I was trying to say by common. this prologue part of the story was just something that happened in my spare time. It is a ...
Jun 2, 2015