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Hi!
All us people trying to read this are just sooooo disappointed.
Yes, this is a review... The most obvious problem with this title is that there is no story to go with it. Where did it go?? Not to tell you how to run the show or anything but this is a big waste of points. No wait, I get it now this story was written in invisible code!! It's still there I can kind of see it now... yeah.... ok no.
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Hi!
All us people trying to read this are just sooooo disappointed. Can't wait to read it!
Yes, this is a review... The most obvious problem with this title is that there is no story to go with it. Where did it go?? Not to tell you how to run the show or anything but this is a big waste of points. No wait, I get it now this story was written in invisible code!! It's still there I can kind of see it now... yeah.... ok no.
Actions to take:
1. write story
2. press edit
3. submit
summary of review: For the sake of us who can't read invisible code please insert at least a few sentences here.
:/ I see a story with the same title and a similar description. Just to be cautious, I'd better point it out.
Chapter one: We are born sinners
Is there supposed to be something here? I was planning on doing a review because the title sounds really cool, but I clicked on the link and there is nothing...? If you're planning on publishing it soon, I would love to read it, so please inform me
Happy writing!
~Anna Rae