Snowery

Hey Flame!! Thanks so much for reviewing and for sticking with my tory!! :) :) I've italicized Lia's thoughts, I can't believe I forgot to do that!! I've tried to ...

Hey! :) I'm glad that you found my review encouraging. I understand completely, sometimes you just have too may ideas it gets out of control and its really hard focusing ...

Thanks for the review! I know there are some mistakes, this one was a little rushed. I'm glad you enjoyed it though :) I'm glad I got those runaway sentences ...

Thanks! I definitely agree, maybe because I'm always late!? I'm really glad that you liked this and 90% is awesome :) better then I hoped for!

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked this :) Yeah I'll definirely be caregull with it.

Hey bradydog! Thanks for your review! Yeah her calmness is intended, in the chapter it mentions that she has had some sort of training. And that is exactly the question ...

Hey Mary97! Thanks for reviewing! Yeah I'l try fix those sentences lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Tottaly! :)

Hey Supermegs12! Thanks for reviewing! Hopefully Ill add more description of Lia later on. Yeah I 'll try keep those sentences under check. I'm glad you liked it :)

Hey Flame!! Looks like its my turn to get reviewed by you! :) I'm glad that you liked the story. Commas are the bane of my existence!! I always get ...

Hey Frosting! Sorry to say this but I think that the chances for Emer the horse are slim, after all Lia is stuck in a tunnel underground... Though I am ...

Hey bubblybubbles101331 (can I call you Bubbly?) ! Thanks for reviewing!! I definitely will try to incorporate more of Lia's description further down the story, it's just a little hard ...

Hey Cheetah! :) Thank you so much for reviewing my story! I didn't expect such a good response from everyone. I was actually really paranoid about this chapter and funnily ...

Hey!! :) Fantasy is my preferred genre as well :) I agree with you completely that world building is totally fun and so is making up all the rules and ...