Snowery

Hey Valo! Thanks for you review. :) I understand what you're saying and my piece probably did get boring. But the point of this was to capture a feeling that ...

Hey KT!! Thanks a lot for reviewing my piece! :) I was wondering whether I should have put lyrical as a subgenre but I wasn't sure. I've never written a ...

Hey! Thanks for your review!! Haha yes that was meat to be floss. :) Thanks again. :)

Hey!! Thanks for reviewing! :) Comma's are the bane of my life, I'll try to fix them :)

Hey MaddyMae, Thanks a lot for reviewing my work. :) I'm glad that you liked it :D I'll definitely try getting around to reviewing your piece. :)

Hey Pan!! Thanks so much for taking the time to review my work! :) I was really glad that you got the way that I was trying to portray fear. ...

Hi Bugslake!! Thanks so much for reviewing!! This isn't the first thing that I've ever written but it's my first short story. I usually write novels and can express myself ...

Hey Emotion1405!! Thanks so much for reviewing! I hope all the hints made sense once you found out that that Fear was the narrator. I'm also really glad that you ...

Thanks cha3739!! Your review means a lot. I'm glad that you liked it and I'm glad that you found my portrayal of Fear accurate :)

Hey Calvinn, thanks for such a comprehensive review :) I'll definitely take on most of what you said, especially about the emperor's speech. About the whole "stick a knife in ...

Thanks for reviewing!! :)

Hey Neverland!! Thanks for your review. :) I'm glad you liked this!! I'm glad you liked the title too. Haha yes Tallon is meant to have double L. Funny thing ...

Hey ongoeslife!! :) Thanks for your review (I think it's great :) ). Thanks as well for giving my story a chance and reading the other chapters! I'm thrilled to ...

Hey lostthought!! Thanks for your review and for sticking to my story!! :) Commas are the bane of my existence!! I'm glad you liked this and I definitely will write ...

Hey Tenyo!! Thanks for such a comprehensive review, it really helped. Yes I'm totally loving it here on YWS. It's definitely the best writing website around. I've tried to edit ...