Snowery

Hey!! Silver here to review for the Review Rippers!! I have to say that I genuinely really enjoyed your story. Great grammar, spelling and structure. You give great descriptions and ...

Hey Lucrezia!! It's me, Silver here to review your story, again!! Haha I must really like it :) Ok so another brilliant chapter I must say, well written as usual. ...

Hey!! Its Silver again! This was much better than the last. Your piece is very well written. Your good grammar and spelling make it an easy read. Your conversations sound ...

Hey! Silver here to review for you! Well I'll start by saying that you seem to have your idea pretty down pat, it seems to be a very interesting idea ...

Hey Niraco!! Silver here to review you story. Firstly this seems to be an interesting story, a family of supernatural living in a suburban town. Also it was very well ...

Hey! I'm back AGAIN! Haha you must be sick of me now :) Well? What can I say except: another great chapter! Your story is really starting to take shape ...

Hey Lucrezia!! Silver back to review! :) This chapter was great! I think it's your best so far. Your grammar, spelling and structure was great. The interaction between characters was ...

Hey!! Silver here to review your piece! :) Hey! Silver here to review you story! I'll start by saying that I REALLY liked this. It was full of action and ...

Hey true alpha! Silver here to review your story. Overall, you seem to have an interesting concept. You had an interesting beginning with the heartbeats an interesting ending with the ...

Hi Rascalover!! Silver here to review your story!! :) First of all it's a nice story it was mainly well written and Your characters seem well developed. Some nit picky ...

Hey Lucrezia!! It's Silver back to review another chapter!! I have to say I liked this a lot. It had a great flow, your grammar, spelling and structure were great ...

Hey Lucrezia!! Silver here to review you piece! :) Your grammar, spelling and structure has been on song so I'll mainly be reviewing your content. I'll start by saying that ...

Hey!! Silver here to review your story!! :) I really like how you've used animals as your characters, I think that is that it's different in a good way. It ...

Hey!! Silver here to review!! Wow! I really liked this. It captured my imagination and I could feel the fear. Your description is very good and your story really drew ...

Hey!! Silver here to review!! I thought that this was a nice quick lighthearted read. I found myself smiling at the captain's bad luck and kind of feeling scared for ...