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Re: Murder Is Blind: First scene
Hi!! Silver here for a review!! I have to say that I absolutely loved this and with the ending that you gave I have a feeling that I'm going to ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: My version of Doppelgangers.
Hey!! Silver here to review your piece today!! :) :) I'll start off by saying that I found this very interesting! You totally held my attention the entire way through ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Fifteen, Part Four
Hey Lulu :) Silver here. Again. Another brilliant chapter in which I have nothing bad or even constructive to say. So I shall instead ramble. I love the fact that ...
Feb 16, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Fifteen, Part Three
Hey it's Silver! Remember me?? :) Your story is going along really well. I comend you for being able to stick with your plotand not really digress which novels can ...
Feb 15, 2014 -
Re: An Author's Dream
Hey, Silver here to review for you!!! I really liked this. It's different to what I usually see and I think it's great. All your characters have a realistic feel ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: The Middle of Nowhere, Pt. 3
Hi!! Knight Silver here to review for you!!! So I've read your other piece and can sort of claim I know what's going on as I type this review. I'm ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: Dark Nights
Hey!! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) Well this was an interesting short, it captured my attention and held it the entire way. I think though as CorianderLee ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Before The Middle of Nowhere
Hey fictional!! silver here to review for you!! :) :) So I don't really know what to feel bout this piece yet. It was interesting and held my attention but ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pieces
Hey Tronks!! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) I must say that I loved your piece. I think that this is a brilliant piece of work that you ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Fences (prologue)
Hey Bugslake!! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) First of all this sounds like and interesting start, who doesn't love the "I'm left by myself and know have ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Inquisition Chapter 1 Part 1
Hey there! Knight Silver here to review for you. First of all welcome to YWS, I'm sure you'll love it here. :) This was an interesting piece.There was good description, ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Camp Tiburon (Chapter One)
Heya Lu!! Silver here to review for ya!! Nice to see a different kind of novel from you. I was mostly well written with only the few nit picks: Something ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: The Animal Chapter 1
Hey there!! Knight Silver here for a review. First of all hats of for writing in present tense! Very brave of you and you've pulled it off very well. Your ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Dumbfound
Hey Griffin!! Silver here!!! :) :) Brilliant!!! That was the first word that came to my mind. I LOVED this story!! It had all the ingrediants of a good suspense ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: The Middle of Nowhere
Hey fictional! Silver here to review for you!! I rhought that this story was great! I loved your little philosophical moments contemplating nobody and nothing, alot of what you said ...
Jan 13, 2014
