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Snowery

The World Is Mine.

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Murder Is Blind: First scene

    Hi!! Silver here for a review!! I have to say that I absolutely loved this and with the ending that you gave I have a feeling that I'm going to ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: My version of Doppelgangers.

    Hey!! Silver here to review your piece today!! :) :) I'll start off by saying that I found this very interesting! You totally held my attention the entire way through ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Fifteen, Part Four

    Hey Lulu :) Silver here. Again. Another brilliant chapter in which I have nothing bad or even constructive to say. So I shall instead ramble. I love the fact that ...

    Feb 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Fifteen, Part Three

    Hey it's Silver! Remember me?? :) Your story is going along really well. I comend you for being able to stick with your plotand not really digress which novels can ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: An Author's Dream

    Hey, Silver here to review for you!!! I really liked this. It's different to what I usually see and I think it's great. All your characters have a realistic feel ...

    Jan 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The Middle of Nowhere, Pt. 3

    Hi!! Knight Silver here to review for you!!! So I've read your other piece and can sort of claim I know what's going on as I type this review. I'm ...

    Jan 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Dark Nights

    Hey!! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) Well this was an interesting short, it captured my attention and held it the entire way. I think though as CorianderLee ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Before The Middle of Nowhere

    Hey fictional!! silver here to review for you!! :) :) So I don't really know what to feel bout this piece yet. It was interesting and held my attention but ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Broken Pieces

    Hey Tronks!! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) I must say that I loved your piece. I think that this is a brilliant piece of work that you ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Fences (prologue)

    Hey Bugslake!! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) First of all this sounds like and interesting start, who doesn't love the "I'm left by myself and know have ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Inquisition Chapter 1 Part 1

    Hey there! Knight Silver here to review for you. First of all welcome to YWS, I'm sure you'll love it here. :) This was an interesting piece.There was good description, ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Camp Tiburon (Chapter One)

    Heya Lu!! Silver here to review for ya!! Nice to see a different kind of novel from you. I was mostly well written with only the few nit picks: Something ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Animal Chapter 1

    Hey there!! Knight Silver here for a review. First of all hats of for writing in present tense! Very brave of you and you've pulled it off very well. Your ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Dumbfound

    Hey Griffin!! Silver here!!! :) :) Brilliant!!! That was the first word that came to my mind. I LOVED this story!! It had all the ingrediants of a good suspense ...

    Jan 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Middle of Nowhere

    Hey fictional! Silver here to review for you!! I rhought that this story was great! I loved your little philosophical moments contemplating nobody and nothing, alot of what you said ...

    Jan 13, 2014


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