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Re: The changing idea of happiness.
Hey!! Silver here to review your essay!! :) This is a good essay. You're good at arguing your points. You also write really well. Some of my thoughts though are: ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Choose the Right Liposuction Surgeon to Optimize Results and Minimize Risks
Hey paslnyc!! Silver here to review your essay today :) First of all, you did a great job. Most of what I have to say to you are mainly positives. ...
Mar 13, 2014 -
Re: Traditions
Hi!! Silver here to review for you!! :) Well I have to say that you started off very well, you grabbed my attention straight away. I like the idea of ...
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: The Shifties: Chapter 2 - Nightmare
Hey there NerdBird!! I'm back to review your second chapter!! And what a good chapter it was too! Full of action, good desciptions and I could really feel the tension, ...
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: The Shifties: Chapter 1 - Prey
Hey NerdBird! Silver here to review as requested! (Love you name by the way :) ) Ok, so first impressions? I loved this. Really.I'ts full of action, has a great ...
Mar 10, 2014 -
Re: ---
Hey!! Silver here to review your piece as requested. :) Ok, so there is NO DOUBT that this is an absolutely brilliant piece. There is just SO MUCH quality in ...
Mar 9, 2014 -
Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 5
Flamey!!!! Gasp!! Another chapter is up! Yesss!!!! Ok as promised I'm back as promised to give you a proper review. I was half asleep last night so the review I ...
Mar 9, 2014 -
Re: Play
Hi!! Silver here to review for you today! First of all I thought that this was ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!! Yes, really I did. I'm not that familiar with script or play ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Eighteen, Part Two
Hi Lucrezia!! Silver here to review you story! I'm trying to clear the green room and yours has been here a while so here I am trying to scour your ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: Gone Theories
Hey!! Silver here to review for you!! Ok so first of all you have a really interesting topic here. It's not just about random weird facts and superstitions but about ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: Ilarien Part 1
Hey Liaya!! Silver here to review for you!! I loves your beginning! The first few sentences really caught my attention and were really well constructed. Throughout the entire piece your ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 4
I'm BACK!!!! Again :) So can I just say that this was an awesome chapter? I have so many good things to say :D You say that your writing deteriorates ...
Mar 6, 2014 -
Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 3
Hey Flamey, it's me again! Muahahah! Well this was far better written then the previous chapter and was quite enjoyable to read. I think that you're starting to get the ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 2
Silver is back to review this one!! Alrighty... So I'm sur that you know this wasn't as good as the first chapter but I get it because Pheonix is a ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 1
Hey Flame!! Silver here to review as promised!! :) Wow this was brilliant. I know it's been said before but your use od=f description and imagery was awesome. I'm given ...
Mar 4, 2014