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Re: Back to September
I automatically think of Taylor Swift when i read the title :D Your story is quite interesting with no definite ending. Well, every story cannot just end, right? Overall, it ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Bob the Tumor
Simply great. I love every bit of it. Truly a humorous tumor. The name you've used also make the story more interesting. What is best about script is that i ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: No-one Knows
I love the message you pointed out in the poem. But it is so direct. You should make the poem more interesting, letting the readers to think and guess your ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Boulevard of life
I read your poem over and over again to find out the story within. Then i knew. The persona wants to kill herself, because of the thought that no one ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Post-Shower Gray
This poem force me to think of what it tells.I am not sure what is the message you want to expressed. In what i can figure out is that this ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Gaddafi Sleeps
When i first saw the title, i was like, " Gaddafi?" Well, i have to say that this is a great poem. I rarely read any poem about politic and ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: The One Person
This is a quite good poetry. But i wish you could put more elements of poetry such as metaphor and simile and personification. I think instead of using the word ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Excuses
I love this poem. One thing for sure, there are people who think and feel the same. " fantasized of death since ten" This is my favorite line. This poem ...
Oct 21, 2011
