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I never liked the word "cacaphony"... Oh well. Yay! Gouging out teacher's eyes! And don't we all have a secret part of ourselves? ;)

They’dll eventually end up in their own little groups. Should be "they'll." So even though their all in the same pot, Should be "they're" instead of "their." The homosexual that’s ...

She's too devious though. ;) And ha! Lupin's in love! *laughs* Don't censor yourself. It's BITCH, dammit! :D

This doesn't seem like a full chapter -- for one, it's too short. Are your other chapters as short as this? :?

Ha! My name is ________! Yeah. We're going to force you to write this whether you know it or not. *plays with Crysi's hair*

Yuck! Bad poetry is a blight to the soul... teachers should pay attention to the stuff they force others to read. O_o

Hehe... I pointed that out because there was something lacking about that paragraph, and that lack made it slightly more confusing and less entertaining. You might want to add something ...

Or bury... ;) Hmmm.... I don't know. Path is a synonym, yes, but it's the brick thing that is clumsy. :?

*eats kitten on patchwork quilt* I'm interpretting at as either an expression of love towards math or a laugh at poetry. O_o I suck... But you don't! So yay for ...

Haha... well, at least you're honest about it. O_o XD

Haha! I'm back! So I love the ending! It's so pretty and lovely and everything and it's so nice. That's the good news. The bad news? The beginning is boring ...

You know what the sad thing is about this work? This is a fantasy story. No, we don't expect this to happen in real life. We don't expect someone to ...

I read it and liked it. More comments to come later, when I'm less about to fall off this world. ;)

Thanks for all the comments! Updated version: The Lady and the Unicorn Eleanor liked the way her husband smelled. It was a strange mixture of sweat, soap, and axle grease, ...

Aye, that's better. I think the best part about it is the changed title. The former title confused me since the story didn't seem to go with the title. ^_^ ...