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Hahaha... you already know I love your work. Just a question... the only random part seems to be the very introduction. What exactly is her motive for suicide? She doesn't ...

Hehehe, I'm going to critique a critic's critique of my critique! :o ... or explain myself better, anyway. :P Eeeh, okay, I'm not goint to critic a critic, BUT -I ...

Please keep this civil. No critiquing critiques... all responses are valid. ;)

Tarin's about thirteen or so... young enough to be young and considered a child, perhaps, and old enough to be lucid. But little kids are surprisingly smart. I wouldn't hold ...

Yay! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. And it is kinda depressing, I suppose. >< Not really the happiest poem around anyway. But I'm glad it's depressing without being ...

...how is it that you can make a rape scene sound so pretty? Nice stuff as usual. :D

Hehe... yeah, a little. At the time, when it was rainy and miserable, it seemed right, though, without the miserable sky and everything, it doesn't quite look right, LOL.

Well... yeah. That sort of showing vs. telling might be applicable to poetry, but in stories, it sort of falls through. If I go on continously about my heorine's eyes ...

Well... it's not really that deep. I walk two beagles regularly, and they're really cute but they REALLY hate water. So once, when I walked them in the rain, they ...

Eep! I read your blog, so I hope you get a chance to read it. Then again, I can probably find a way to bug you, so ha! :D One ...

Hehehe... but symbolism can vary from person to person! Besides, I'm still picking up some of the symbolism for my story. Not everything is intentional. He probably didn't intend to ...

Enjoy? Obedience to authority, loyalty to self, devotion to the cause. The life of a soldier. The life of this soldier. Ah... a philosophical musing in the beginning. The problem? ...

Er... hate to break it to you, but that format is pretty unreadable. You might want to edit it for those on the web instead of just your teacher. What ...

Heheh! Two Adams on a thread! :D Adam Atlantian>> Thanks! I was afraid it might be corny and stuff, but your assurance is always nice. ;) Myth>> Hahaha. The sad ...

blackwings>> More to come? :o But...! The Unicorn Killers is next! :) Shafter>> Ah yes... thanks. Never trust the Californian on matters of snow. ;) Unless of course they live ...