Snoink

Locked. Plagiarism.

Locked. Plagiarism.

Yup! It's plagiarized. Locked.

YOU HAD THREE MORE CHAPTERS AND YOU DIDN'T POST THEM? *shuns* You totally have enough points to post them. DO IT.

Haha, don't worry! I'll add more soon! :D He did have a stroke! But I think I was trying to avoid medical terminology here to maintain a more fantastic feel, ...

Oh! I get what you're saying! I think she's trying to match his weird behavior with something recognizable to her. So, it would be like saying, "That girl in class ...

Eek! I was afraid that would get confusing. White Swans and Black Swans are more like... demigods that look like swans, so they can do some additional stuff that swans ...

Aha! See, I was under the impression that this was some sort of formal meeting between the military, so I was sooooo hopelessly confused. But maybe this could be due ...

Okay! So I flipped through the chapters and this one seemed the most changed, so I figure I would comment on this one! Though, really... chapter 5 soon? Yes? Yes?! ...

IT'S BECAUSE YOU ARE DEALING WITH OTHER AWESOME THINGS.

Wow, Snoink. You don't hold back, do you? Eek, not really. I should probably warn you now that there are some really squeamish parts coming up eventually. Not immediately , ...

Ooers, you're right, SweetMoments. It is a bit of a strange ending and it kind of ends on a downer. Maybe I'll add something more to it -- the next ...

I got rid of some typos and stuff. Yaaaaaaay.

Thanks! :D The next part of the bastard princess story is in the fourth part, so you can read about it there. :)

I looked it over and I realized I only found one in past tense. Yay for over-reacting! It's here: “My poem, I could not think of a word that rhymed ...