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JESSA! NO. You are not allowed to put this in the short stories section! You must put it in the novels section, and you will COMPLETE this story or I ...

Hey cupcake! :D I adore rainbows, so I figured I should take a look at this! :) Anyway, one thing I kind of missed was there was no grand climax. ...

This is rather true! It's kind of scary how the media warps our perception of beauty, especially with photoshop and the like! One thing that I would like is more ...

I read this and my heart broke! I'm so sorry this happened! He sounds like vermin and nobody should be exposed to those kinds of people, especially in such intimate ...

Hello! This was a fantastic little short story... I quite liked it! Very cute... and boy, did Lisa get Drew back! One thing I would like to know is what ...

Hello! :D I didn't see the title first, so when I read it, I was like, "OMG, IS SHE TALKING ABOUT HEAVEN? I BET SHE IS." Then I looked up ...

Hey there! First of all, you need to spell check this! You don't spell "atheist" or "atheism" right, and while that's a minor point, it makes your argument look a ...

Haha, this poem is awesome! Not sure why a tortoise would help a rabbit, but whatever! Anyway, I want to know who exactly is taunting the rabbit. You said rebels, ...

Wooooo! I'm first! :D Okay! So, since I have the feeling that this is a first draft, I am NOT going to slaughter it ruthlessly and make you not want ...

Eek, this does need help! I think a lot of trimming might be really healthy for this. we like to wish for impossible things together--

way. You didn't do that. You didn't do that. *reads again* :( Okay! Quick word lesson! :) apart = indicates a kind of split or separation. To be apart of ...

Ooooooh. Paul's "Trip." I get it! For a second, I thought he actually went to Saturn! But, really, wouldn't they kind of need proof that he actually did go to ...

Tangent! I love you! :) I really liked this poem, though I had to stare at it for a bit for it to make sense to me. What can I ...

Yay! This is definitely a lot better. :) One thing you might think about doing you might try not using the title in the poem. Not to say that using ...

Okay, so I have to wonder... why is your poem shaped like a madlib? Or are those they supposed to be something else? In any case, right now it looks ...