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Re: A true writer
Hey qaralynn! One of the things that I noticed here was... well... how flat everything is. If you want to talk about a true writer, why not talk about the ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Random
XD Oh dear! Well, okay. This was very amusing! I'm not sure what exactly this is for, but I am 99.7% this wasn't serious and you're just trying to get ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: My Guardian Dog 2 - Rewritten!
Rawr! I am here! :D Okay, this was definitely not as intense, so you will be happy that I will not have a heart-attack soon. Or something like that. ;) ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: My Guardian Dog - Rewritten!
Holy crap. This was super intense. I was seriously dreading getting to the end, just because my stomach was in knots, lol. Okay, first a couple of things... I suddenly ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Spare~2
Rawr! I finally am getting to this... I suck, I know. :P Okay, so I was a bit confused during this! I think there were some lines that you thought ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Tuesday [Supernatural cover of Rebecca Black]
Ceres! :D First of all, I am glad you spent weeks and weeks perfecting this perfection of perfect perfectly serious work. Not many people strive for this level of quality, ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: (insert interesting title here)
Hahah! This reminds me of the poems that I used to write! Yeah... I mostly do prose now? Anyway, I have to say that my favorite part about the poem ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Ice Ambassadors: Chapter 1 (Edits!)
Yay! We love Nano and the opportunities it gives us, right? :D Anyway, this was fun! General impressions? Ambria is an idiot. I don't really like her at all... she ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Why am I a Christian?
Er, this may just be me being dumb, but what exactly is Christianese anyway? I have never heard of it before. I am not quite certain of this... this may ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Stuck in a Dead F**k
Hello! I don't mind depictions of sex or anything, even if they're graphic, but I found this really boring. Maybe that's because I was expecting something much graphic, and this ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Hearts of Oak: Part I, Chapter I
Kelly! :D Okay! So, I agree with Gryphon here... the part in Swift's POV seems a little pointless and when we got to Queenie's point of view, it was rather ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (3)
GryphonFledgling, m'dear! I did say I would get to this, didn't I? :D Anyway, quick is a good word to describe this! It did seem a bit quick... and the ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Diary of a Lost Soul
One more reason why it's good to stop for a bit and restart... rusty or not, this is better than the sorts of things that you've written before. ;) Okay, ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: .
Blackbird! All right, I liked the story! It was quiet and subtle, it had some great moments of description, I love the focus on the shirt and the mother's reactions ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: The curse of Medusa
Hahaha! This was pretty awesome. I liked your sense of pacing and all the action in the story. In fact, it reads more like an action adventure story than a ...
May 29, 2011