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Hey Whitney! :) Okay! So, I have to admit... I've been the recipient of a best friend poem before, and I was tickled pink. So, if you give this to ...

Hey tonepoem! :) Aha, a war poem! Always very dramatic. Now... er... a couple of things! You decided to write about war, which is really dramatic and everything. War means ...

Hey Phil! :) So, this definitely seems quickly done! It was probably so quickly done because of the contest, actually. I don't know if you want to keep it as ...

I remember seeing this poem! :o Just as a sidenote, I think that you don't have to post the same poem multiple times on YWS... you can definitely use the ...

Ooh... actually I quite liked this! Not sure why it hasn't been reviewed yet, but I'm glad it hasn't, otherwise I probably wouldn't have seen it! Anyway, the way I ...

Hey SnarkHunter! :) First of all, I would love to see you write this with stanzas and lines and everything, just because you have a bunch of neat rhymes and ...

LOL! I have to say... this reminds me of some of the poems that I wrote when I had way too much math and science homework. You know... when you ...

Hey Phil! :) Right now, it looks like you have just a bunch of ideas put into fragments here. You have this weird jekry motion in your poem about war, ...

Hey Ninja! :) Okay, this may just be me, but you kept on throwing out all these adjectives about how empty or vacuous or whatever. Which is fine! But, you ...

Not quite heaven now, is it? ;) Okay, so first of all, you had a bunch of typos. So take another look at your poem! Next... uh... the first stanza ...

Ooer... is this poem kind of like a fan poem for the Hunger Games? I have not read it yet but I know the basic premise so this poem really ...

Ack... I hope isn't a true story! Though if it is I am glad it ends well. :) So one thing that I noticed is that you told what you ...

Ooooo... this is a really neat idea! Or maybe I'm just biased toward it because it is mathematical? Anyway, this reminds me of Edwin Abbott Abbott's "Flatland." Which, if you ...

Hahaha... I actually have blue/gray eyes! They're pretty neat. I hope I'm not like this guy though! He seems like a jerk. Anyway! I really like this direction, because you ...

Engineer! You asked me to review this, and so I am! :) But... um... instead of doing the typical critique, I am going to ask two questions that I want ...