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Gah! Story is more than just dialogue. Heck, dialogue is more than just what the character says. How does this character say it? What is going on? Set up the ...

:P What do you expect? Griffinkeeper and I are twins. Okay, I don't want to be repetive when I don't have to, but I just posted an article you might ...

:lol: First of all, President Bush has been seen rocking out to an I-pod, though this has been kept under wraps since Apple is a very liberal company. Second, good ...

Some of them look like confused penguins! Comedy is hardly fiction, but you did something which you should be slashed on your head for and beaten with a very large ...

I actually liked this poem. It took me several rereadings, but I did eventually like this poem. At first it pissed me off because I thought you had cluttered it ...

Oh dear! You wanted me to critique a romance? Not just a romance, but a romance with poetry? You don't know me very well... Nevertheless, I will try to critique ...

First of all, spell check it. There's lots of random errors. Most of them are readable, but I'm still not sure what "pubbing" means. Either that, or my American mind ...

this is only the begging I've a lot to work on this but enjoy. CL Slaying the Dreamer I'm a priest for the poorest sacrifice I'm but a raft in ...

No I wouldn't. For one, this seems too one-sided. Automatically when reading this, the evil side is looked upon as the good side. Some writers might see this as a ...

That's not true! I've seen many articles that short in the Wall Street Journal. Not enough to comment on, but I haven't a clue where you're going with this. Consider ...

El cuento está bien, pero yo pienso Ud. debe escribir el cuento en español. Si Ud. escribe en español el cuento está muy fuerte. Pero los escritores inglés no comprenden ...

I dunno... the rhyming seems forced and the rhythm seems off. It's a good effort, mind you, but there are some lines that just seem horribly forced. Especially here: Some ...

YAY! I'm working on a story very much like this, so let's see if I can help you... The way this critique will be, just to be different, very fragmented. ...

For some weird reason, I liked this. Maybe because it wasn't so overwhelmed with angst like the other poems I've read. Even so, I think the last line is a ...

It's not compatable; it's compatible. Change that. :P Otherwise, I loved it. My dad got one of those PDAs and it was telling it the directions to our hotel on ...