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Haha, this was a fun poem. ^^ That is... I liked it because of the allusions to history and the very ironical way it was written. So let's go through ...

Nice poem! :D *stars* This may just be me, but I think I would like it better without the first three stanzas. The beginning of the fourth stanza ("O Warrior, ...

Hey Goober! You asked, so I came. :) First of all, there are A LOT of grammar mistakes. I could go over them all, but I'm lazy and I don't ...

Eeeeeeek! Okay, so before I forget, I'm totally starring this. Wait a second! *scrolls up* *scrolls down* Okay, it is starred! :D Now for the critique! I clicked on this ...

Oh dear! This looks like a madlib! XD See? 1. Noun 2. Name 3. Noun 4. Noun. 5. Adjective. 6. Noun. 7. Noun. 8. Famous celebrity. 9. Location. 10. Impressive-sounding ...

Hi kissthewitch! You asked for a critique on Pig Droppings, and I'm finally getting around to them. Yes, I know, I suck. XD Anyway, you definitely have an awesome style! ...

Hello! You asked me to critique this, and finals are over, so to celebrate, I'm totally looking over your poem. And that was totally not a run-on sentence. :P To ...

Tangent, mi amor! Te amo para siempre y siempre.

OMG. I loved this short story! It was sooooo cute! And yeah. When I started it, I thought, "Oh no! A dog-hating person!" but then I kept on reading it ...

Eek. This prologue kind of sucks in a couple of different ways. For one, you don't really say anything useful. I don't know about you, but I have a 128K ...

Yeah... the voice is off. And the way he is looking for her and everything is creepy, and the voice only heightens that. What you would have to do to ...

No, it's three bajillion million years old. XD I sort of don't like it at all, but I like your new stuff, so it's all good! There are way too ...

To critique a poem To stare at it To think about the lip I bit The broken images are very random a spool of thread a place for tandems How ...

Okay... this might be bizarre, but the coolest image here, the one that made me go, "WOW!" (it takes a lot for me to say that, trust me,) is this ...

The first three lines sound really cool, but they don't connect with the rest of the poem. In fact, the first official line seems to be the fourth line, if ...