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Hey, Kyousuke! Saw you reviewing, so I'd figure I would swing by. :) I noticed that you had to tell what your poem was about at the very beginning and ...

Hey kingolions! This might just be me, but I want to know how she died. Because right now it sounds like she just disappeared, until the last stanza. And I ...

Hey bookgeek! First of all, these girls seem really, really immature. I thought they were in high school, but they're not! So it's a bit weird. Also! Why does she ...

Hey Layla! First of all, I boosted this to a 16+ because of the f-word in it. ;) So, this was a really good piece! I'm glad it's a happy ...

Wait! This seems incomplete! He covers his ears and then the wolves are knocked cold... and then what??? Does Mr. Car A. Rot do anything more? Does he kill them? ...

Hey ultraviolet! :D These were some really cute poems! I always liked limericks... they're so bouncy and playful. :) Anyway, Renesmee's limerick was the best by far. The other two ...

Yay! A historical play! That's what Shakespeare wrote for the most part, you know? ;) Anyway, as far as this play goes, I think I want more. Your story is ...

Hey sare! :D My favorite stanza was the fourth. It was lots of wonderful sensory images that I just adored and, from all the descriptions, you could imagine the relationship ...

Haha, this reminds me of some of my old poems to get into a character's head. Although, like this poem, it wasn't very poetic at all. XD Conflict and such ...

Hey nayex! Lovely poem! I really like the words used and the ideas involved and pretty much all the content. It's quite lovely! The only thing that kind of irks ...

Hey Dante! Maybe this is just me, but I would like to read less about how you're bearing your soul to us and more bared soul... if that makes sense. ...

Hey Eli! So! This story! This story is about poker! In fact, it's about a woman playing poker. Poker isn't really interesting in itself... it really isn't. What is interesting, ...

It really is quite terrible, yes. He's not the only one... there are many other stories like that. I know that on occasion, Nate will post some of these stories ...

Yay for dystopian worlds! Your teacher sounds awesome. :) I agree with Alteran! You definitely need more focus. And I say this with love! I hate to say this because ...

Hey Passion! Nice to see you back. :) Yep. Proofreading is your friend. Though I can totally understand if you make lots of mistakes... you should see some of the ...