Sneha

A decent attempt. This one seems to come from one of your personal experiences so the emotion is correctly woven. A little correction needs to be made with the line, ...

Full marks for the concept. It actually depicts the sort of person you are, so yes, the concept is incredible. Now, having said that, the main problem I feel lies ...

A nice attempt I'd say. The poem is indeed very metaphorical and emotion based. It's like a riot of perception, a perception that can differ from person to person. There ...