Snazzy

Hi! This is a nice topic, a good one to describe, anyway. You end it nice with "sleeping" on that last sentence, instead of just leaving us hanging with a ...

Hi! This is hilarious! :D I truly love it!! You add in nice humor, and make it personal by writing in second person. Anyway, time for the review... (okay, go! ...

HIYA!!! :D Way to keep the plot moving along! :D Now that they are back on land (after flying all that way), we can get a little action in! The ...

Hi! Fantastic work here! It is beautifully written. You use great description, and I love the topic you chose! Anyway, time for the, somewhat short, review! :D Bursting through a ...

Hello MadWriter! This is amazing! :D You keep up the suspense throughout the entire prologue, and the end is a definite cliff-hanger, urging the readers not to stop reading for ...

Hello jessiebear! Snazzy, here for to review your piece! I know how I've already said this before, but I like how you include a picture in these writing exercises. Nice ...

Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here! Second, I have to say, I enjoyed this very much! :D I love the story theme, and ...

Hello! This is good! You have some beautiful yet frightening imagery in this chapter, and you transition well! (Example: "one dream to the other paragraph") Now, for the review! around ...

Hi felistia! It's always a joy to read and review your works! I love your style, and also the subject you chose to write about. Overall, it's a pretty snazzy ...

Hi felistia! This is a nice poem! You've got good imagery, a good subject, and a really good beginning that draws readers in! Now, for the review!! :D Burrowing up ...

Hello Waffle! :D This is a nice poem, and the ending left me with a good impression, as did the beginning! Good job with that! Anyway, time for the review! ...

Hello! :D Finally starting at the beginning, and OH MY GOODNESS. So Megan is really... AWESOME! :D :D This novel just took a new turn (not really, but it did ...

Hi Falconer! I agree with TheSilverFox, WHY MUST YOU MAKE ME CRY?!?! :D I was 'this' close to actually doing it... So this was really good! Now, for the review- ...

Hi Falconer! I hope you're having a wonderful day! :D This is a good chapter, as the Meg (and the readers) FINALLY get an answer out of Chris! :D Anyway, ...

Hi felistia! Good chapter! :) Now, the dragon's are at their destination. ;) Way to keep the plot moving. Now, for the review... :D After breakfast the group headed towards ...