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Re: Chapter 1
Hello, Audreise! I've always been fascinated with novels that include letters to and from characters, so I'm very excited to read and review this for you! I think one thing ...
Dec 18, 2017 -
Re: Not Yet....
Hello! I haven't written a review in a LONG while, but I'm hoping to start reviewing regularly again. (Sorry in advance.) More imagery I think could help in selling your ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 8.1
Hello again! :) I don't know if this is just a personal preference, but I think it seems odd not continuing this chapter directly from the suspenseful piece of paper ...
Sep 6, 2017 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 7.2
Guess who's baaaaccckkk? :D This is my first official review for RevMo (I started late because I was on a short vacation), so please excuse my rustiness! I'm hoping to ...
Sep 5, 2017 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 7.1
Hello Falco! I know I haven't been reviewing these as faithfully as I have wished, but I'm back! (And almost kind of sort of catching up!) First off, I want ...
Jun 7, 2017 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 6.3
Okay, so I have no idea what I'm doing on YWS at 12:26 AM, but I wrote half of this review during review day and half of it now. Anyway, ...
May 29, 2017 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 6.2
Hello! Snazzy back for more reviews! :3 It was troubling to know that there was evidence to support that feeling he has shrugged off. Okay, so this is REALLY nitpicky, ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 6.1
Greetings! Since summer is here, I will definitely be having a lot more time to review and read, and I want to try and get caught up with your novel ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: The Selection Series
Hi Kemstar! (A belated welcome to YWS!) So this is actually posted as a literary work; people give you feedback/criticism on it in the form of a review. (No worries!) ...
May 4, 2017 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 5.2
Hello again! This was a pretty good chapter (part), overall. These critiques are partly scrounging around in the dirt, and partly just things I noticed that seemed odd/off from the ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 5.1
Hi Falco! I'm still kind of in "review research essays" mode because of an essay we're writing for Composition, but I'll try my best! If I scream at you for ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter One - Aspen Faye
Hello, and a belated welcome to YWS! :D Snazzy here for a review! The house is a lot bigger than it looks from the outside, Mom wasn't kidding. This sentence ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Countdown
Hello, and a belated welcome to YWS! :3 Oooh, I've heard of this prompt before! I think there was a Writers Tournament with a prompt similar to this one, and ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: The Crucifixion and Resurrection
Hello! I love narrative poems, especially when they're ones that I believe in or can relate to. This is definitely one of them! It looks like previous reviewers have already ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: Junior High Interactions
Hello, and a belated welcome to YWS! :3 So first off, this is a really cute idea for a poem. It takes a refreshing spin on a somewhat overused theme. ...
Feb 22, 2017
