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Hey, NightStorm. Here as requested. So Confetti seemed to catch many of the errors and things I would have made a point to pointing out to you. There were many ...

As requested, Bud. :mrgreen: So. For one, I see you have this posted under short stories? o.O It seems like poetry to me. I mean, that's what this is isn't ...

Hello, Franz. ;) I see you've begun a new novel. This is sort of exciting. I've been looking for another good novel to possibly follow. As always, your writing was ...

Hey, Noelle. :) So I see this is for the fear contest. Interesting, scary stories can be a bit difficult to execute a lot of times. I've tried writing one ...

Hey there, Emmzzie. :) So I recall reading this before, but I'm not quite sure why I never reviewed it. It's quite interesting of course. Though, the creepy torture content ...

Hey, BrooklynWriter. ;) So what you have here seems pretty short. Not that short is a bad thing, just that when I read a short poem I expect it to ...

Hey, Jolene. :) So, there were quite a few grammatical/chat-speaky/spelling errors going on here I see. I can see why some might not choose to capitalize when writing poetry for ...

Hey, Geek. . .-yKid. xD So I like how you attempted to some up a simple and somewhat masked point of view from the main character. Though I think you ...

Yo, yo, yo, MMM. :mrgreen: So, I guess I agree with shiney1 partly, but not entirely. I think that I had to read this another time over before I could ...

This is absolutely beautiful, Walker. Seriously. Chopin!? This is one of my favorites. Nothing compliments poetry like this but classic piano, you genius. :mrgreen: The words were melodic. I played ...

Hey there, Dolwright. ;) I loved reading your poetic take on the Young Writers Society. ^-^ It's always interesting reading users tributes to the site. We get quite a bit ...

Hello again. :D So, I see the style of narration you're going with here. I can only assume it's going to have many different angles to it as the story ...

Hello there. :D Well, I suppose there're a few things that stuck out to me that I think I'll go on and point out. The first thing, the overall big ...

Hey Skins! xP Glad you posted this. Was wondering when you'd post another chapter, and here t'is! Anyway though, onto my shot at a review. It's really quite difficult trying ...

I see this is for the 150 words contest. From what I've gathered of what's going on, your two characters are fighting. And one disarms the other. And then, the ...