Smilykid

Thank you very much. :)

Thank you very much for taking the time to do these reviews! I appreciate them.

I think this poem is very similar to the poems I write. It's short and it gets to the point. I think there is something beautifully simplistic about short poetry ...

I think this poem is very similar to the poems I write. It's short and it gets to the point. I think there is something beautifully simplistic about short poetry ...

Thank you for taking the time to review this, even in your time of grieving. I wish you the best.

I think having a suicide note as a prologue is brilliant because the reader immediately jumps to conclusions as to what could have led to this person's desire to kill ...

Thanks a lot for all your advice! I see what you mean when you say I have to build up to those suspenseful moments. Also, I laughed when I read ...

Haha! I didn't even notice the irony in that line! Thanks so much for reading story, by the way. I didn't think anyone would actually take the time to read ...

Thanks everyone for your comments! I may end up doing an extended version of this.

Thanks for taking your time to review it! Ya I'm new so I will post a revised version and PM you. -Smilykid :)