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Wow. This poem is shorter than what you may usually find around when you go digging deeper in the world of poems, yes, but you've got so much feeling here ...

I can't even begin to express how moved I was when I read this poem. It's magical. That is the only word I can come up with to describe this ...

I really like this story! The choice of words you have used really bring the story together. I do hope that this is part of a bigger story because there ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I think that, if anything, you could add more details to each letter though, make the reader really understand and feel what he's going through ...

Poetry has never been one of my favorite things to read, but I really do love this. The wording and just the way you put it all together is wonderful. ...

Fantastic! For your first poem this is incredible (it's far better then my first poem might I add :wink:). There's so much emotion going on in this. And for some ...

I really like this story, and the way you managed to write it with no 'the's in it is very impressive. I hope to see more about this story from ...

I can't help but keep thinking he's a girl... Maybe it's the name? :? Still, lovely piece of writing you have here. I definitely will be continuing to read your ...

You wrote this when you were 11 or 12? God, it doesn't seem like that! This poem has a deep emotion and it really touches my heart. :) I really ...