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Re: Lights.
This is the kind of poetry I can never write. It's just brilliant. So many references to different things but everything still fits and makes sense. Great poem. Just awesome.
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Scar of Society/Take Me Away
I love it! It reminds me of a Linkin Park song. I especially love the line, "I don’t know who I am, I’ve lost myself to the voices again". Beautiful ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Wait, Before You Go
Wow, KatTrain, I'm really jealous of you! That was wonderful. I also love the imagery. The rhythm wasn't perfect but the line "with no plot line worth the trouble of ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: A Bitter Beauty
You made a bitter beauty truly beautiful. Amazing. I also don't know much about poetry but I loved it. I especially loved the line "a decrepit museum of how false ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: My Ghost and I
Thank you for all of your comments. I have added more to the poem. I may add more in the future as my ghost continues to follow me. I don't ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Nothing's gonna be okay
Hauntingly beautiful. I loved it. I don't think there is a thing I would change. It flows wonderfully and the word choice -- just excellent!
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Little Birdie
Awww, that was really cute. It should be on a greeting card or postcard. I really liked it. Great job.
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Sundays at Tiffany's by James Patterson
Oh, thanks for that! I was in a hurry. :)
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Memories
Oh, this piece is beautiful! I absolutely love it and don't think you should change a thing.
Dec 12, 2009