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Its awesome!

I find this a bit dry This doesn't carry emotion at all, it lacks a lot of it. Try deepen it a little bit to try and add some emotion ...

I love it! Biffle has pointed out the nitpiks already, but i just wanted to say that it was fantastic! AWESOME STUFF ciao ~Smexx

Cool! I like it, your description is not vapid and boring but fun and awesome! I like this lot and you shout keep going on with this! PM me for ...

This is very cool, I love your description and deepness. You are talented, I'll tell you that. keep writing! PM me if you need anything! ~Smexx

I love it~!~ This is so fluent and it makes me want to read it over and over again! You are very talented! Keep writing ~SMexx

I like this, by the looks of it you are very descriptive in your work. Your choices of names and characters are very cool and I enjoyed this thoroughly! Keep ...

Its brilliant!!!! 100% original!!!! LOVE IT ~smexx

Oh my gosh! This story has left me begging for more! please PM me when chapter five is up! xox ~Smexx

It was a little weird for me. The whole time I was reading this I had this big cheesy performance playing in my head. It was your typical aggressive jerk ...

Biffle here to review!!!! “Hey babe, what you doing here all alone?” he reached to touch my face but I stepped back so he was nowhere near me. Wasn't she ...

lol! Sorry guyz! The flu I have must have made me stupid... but then again it must have been a blonde moment... considering I am blonde

How can Trey's brother be 3 months older? Isn't that impossible or are they step-brothers of something? Why cant they be? They go to the same school and everything! lol ...

I love it! Its Brilliant! So deep! It gets right down into you. Fantastic! xx (its Kayla btw) smexay

also have a few misspelled words and in my mind I would spell "mum" as mom. Sorry but I am a proud kiwi (New Zealand) girl and that is how ...