SlyNightOwl

Your character has a lot of personality and your writing is fun to read(: Write more. Be careful where you put your commas also, there's a lot of them.

I love this, especially towards the end where the poem flows into the next line and makes a sentence(: Lovely

Oh, this is really good and I can compare it perfectly to my day. I'll definitely remember this the next time I feel down~

I don't think the ending is weak at all. I actually had goose bumps on my arms and legs. Very nice.

Your poem shows the truth. I don't like admitting that this can actually happen, probably has happened. I love what you've written, though. It's beautiful

This sounds amazing! Your writing is really good and I didn't see any errors. If it were an assignment you'd most definitely get an A+. Have an apple and be ...

Oh, wow.. This is amazing! C': I have a friend who needs to read this. She's all about logic and knowledge and scolds me for doing great in English and ...