Slowlyfaded

Hey sorry i never reply. i should do that more. Most the time i dont reply, i just look back and see what i can change, i change it then ...

I like your poem alot and i agree with Slickjimmy the shoulders thing i think threw me off. though it was easy to follow and i like this alot, as ...

I agree with was lacking in something...which happens to be just what snoink said so why repeat it?

Umm thanks i guess...never though of it that way. But thanks

Umm what backgroundbob said..GOSH!! always writting so much, my hand would hurt...anyway back to the point. i wasnt sure i understood it. maybe thats just me but i got confused. ...

I liked this alot...sorry im not to good at this yet and i dont have much knowlage about grammer and stuff. But as far as i know they have said ...