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Dear NovemberNovelist, I am going to give you a very important tip that will help you VERY much throughout your time here on YWS. It is not the best idea ...

Dear Persephoneia, That poem was absolutely wonderful. You have SO much potential! You used wonderful vocab which I am always a big fan of. Really, I just can't find the ...

Ok, let me just say that I really liked the meaning of the poem, but I didn't like the poem. It was much too short for such a large concept. ...

I'm very excited to be your reviewer today! A sliver of silver, a river of light. I just loved those 2 opening statements. Very well done! Cascading down my bed ...

Very excited to be your reviewer today! Look at me.Tell me what you see. I am thin. I’m not the guy who’d always grin. I feel like you could have ...

Very nice poem! I LOVE the point you made, although at the end of the poem instead of saying "Each an innocent life taken for what,A simple tree?" I would ...

Oh my! That poem is just too cute! I can relate to every single line of it. I actually prefer simple, funny poems like this as opposed to long, strongly ...

This was a very nice poem indeed. You expressed your feelings in a way that lets anyone with a dog relate to you. I could relate, but more with my ...

Wow! this poem was VERY nice! You were able to use complicated words but not overdo your gift of words. The rhyme and rhythm you used made the poem easy ...

Wow! Very nice poem! I could really feel the power behind it! My only suggestion is that for your next poem, don't make it all one big sentence with a ...

The only thing i would change is when you are continuing a sentence in the next line, use commas to show people that it is the same thought. Some people ...

Hello! I thought your story was very good, but the thing that really ruined it for me was your choice of wors to describe the "creepy creature". The use of ...