Sleeplessend

Dream work you give me damn good reviews. Thank you :)

Im glad to see this on literary spotlight. It deserves to be on here.

Im glad to see this on literary spotlight. It totally deserves to be on here.

Thank you for the review. I know i miss the punctuation alot and its something that i am definitely going to work on. I also changed those words. I didnt ...

Aww thank you so much for the kind woes I will definitely try to keep posting some more work on here.

Yes the little ones hes referring to are the ones with him un the waiting room. I thought calling where I wrotebthem looking at him would tie that together andbhim ...

Merci! :)

Thank you for the kind words/review! :)

Thank you so very much I honestly didnt think it was that good I wrote it in like 10 minutes but thank you :)

Thank you for the kind words to my piece :) yes Crucifere is one of the main characters to the story along side cross and yes I love the shock ...

Thank you very much for the review. I will definately remember all the pointers for punctuation I do know that is something I need to work on and as for ...

Short and simple process of the steps of love making. Liked that it was choronological as well. On a completely different humerous note the tone and pace of this poem ...

No it wont interrupt anything I have some work done that has yet to be posted. I just started writing the story again after a while of not writing. Hope ...

I will post another piece about crucifere right now if you want to read it.

You can read about the "Boy" (named Cross by the way) in my portfolio. Its labled the inversion its about him. Thank you for the kind words this was actually ...