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I hid behind Ryan's broad shoulders, peeking only slightly to watch the teenage girl throw the basketball at the hoop. It didn't seem like she noticed we were there as ...

But there was nowhere to run. Tash reached the other side of the room and found himself faced with another locked door. Azarus had recovered and was already on top ...

I liked it a lot and reminded me of like T.S Eliot, or like Lord Byron or something. It was very well written. You craftily arouse my emotions To stir ...

I like this poem, it’s very good. I do have some suggestions for the work that would make it (to me at least) a little better. I would separate some ...

Great imagery that you have here. It’s very good and I very much liked this poem. Wow. I really love this; it's so powerful, and sends a clear message. Great ...

I like this poem! It's very scary and exciting at the same time. Reminds me of a Doctor Who episode, but that's my nerdiness coming on. I like how you ...

This is a very well written story. It made me feel like I was there with her, feeling what she was feeling. I always do like it when people retell ...

This is a pretty good story. I liked it and would like to read more of it. Here are a few things I would fix about this. I crouched in ...

At first I thought it was a poem about a broken up couple or something like that, then a assassin, then was like, "Wow, I get it now!" This is ...

I also agree that it could use more description. Your story has the potential to be and I really like the idea!! Here are a few things that I found ...