SkyeWalker

Check my other responses, I'm too lazy to re-type it out on mobile. XD THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW THOUGH. :D

Like I said In a previous reply, I bolder it because I felt the rhyme scheme changed a bit. Maybe it didn't. Did it? That's why it was bolded. I ...

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THANKS! :D The bold represented sorta changing rhythm. Make sense? :)

Yeah, I agree that monster was a bit strange. XD

Dankee!! :D

You did say 'Okay' to a long review, I'm just saying.

Longer. Like this review could be.

Thanks for the review! I actually needed one that explained what I did wrong (clearly), so this was great. Thanks so much for the review! :D

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This was a double post, sorry! :D

Okay. That's probably a good idea. Just be glad that someone who knows your sister IRL caught it instead of a 50 year old person! :D

Suggestion: Don't put your name on online works! Not being rude or anything, it's just wiser to remain anonymous online! :D

I see that this is classified as horror. But what's even more terrifying is that it's classified as humor as well. O_O XD

Write Moooorrrreee.

I shall review this later. *places in review box* However, this review will be very long and nitpick, so be prepared.