SkyeDreamer

Just dropping in to say that the concept for this poem is really cool! I loved how the last stanza came as such a shock- there was nothing to suggest ...

Once again... I can't. I can't. Ugh thank you so much! And I think you're right about the "Smile!" phrase, so I'm glad you pointed that out. You literally made ...

Thank you so much for the review! I think you're right about the ellipses and spacing of those lines... I'm really glad you caught that for me :) Thank you ...

Okay stop I'm crying :') Wow thank you for this... Thank you so much! It means so much to know it impacted you so much, because it definitely was a ...

Oh my goodness thank you THANK you! I love hearing that those lines stuck out to you because dang, I loved writing them. Aahh thankful :):):)

Thank you so much!! Nit picky reviews are how we all get better... I appreciate it! :)

Thank you so much!! Nit picky reviews are how we all get better... I appreciate it! :)

Wow, I can tell you really loved your cat; losing your fur babies is so hard. I really like how you emphasized certain lines with italics, although I cannot find ...

Thank you so much, wow. It is true, which made it all the more raw to write... So I'm really glad that shows through

"The pacing is strange and the gimmick is tired." Maybe, but that does not mean you can't edit until you're happy with it. I loved, "She was practiced, calloused, fake ...

Thank you so much for the review! It truly means a lot to me. After rereading, I agree with your critiques; thanks for pointing them out. I appreciate your words ...

Thank you so much! I appreciate the way you kind of analyzed it; it means a lot to me that someone found some depth to it. Thanks again!

Thanks so much, I appreciate it! It means a lot to me; I'm really glad you liked the ending. :)

Ahh thank you so much for the review! I went back and reread with your suggestions, and you make some good points- you may be right about removing "are," I ...

You captured your feelings using very simply, which I know is not an easy feat when you really like a boy! I really liked the ending- it was unexpected, and ...