Skye

It really brings home the sadness of it all, but you're right: we never will really know what it feels like unless we go through it ourselves. I agree with ...

I love this, it really makes me think. I agree with Mesh, don't repeat "hall" in the second line. I would probably do something like "I walk down/the Hall of ...

This is really good. There is just one thing that I might have done differently. I cant remember when exactly I would have said "I can't remember exactly when" but ...

Beautifully written...I love it, especially the repeating 3 lines which have already been quoted numerous times by the time Skye Demon finds this poem. :roll: Anyways, great poem! ~Skye Demon

Reading it through, it didn't really make sense of what you meant until I read the last line, then it tied all together. (That's not a bad thing, just an ...

This is really good! Dark, with a good message in it. No matter how you see him Find the knife, and take it For you shouldn't be that close. I ...

I love it! Beautiful stuff! I just have one thing: Solom mouth Should be "Solemn mouth" I think. Otherwise, it's great! Blue eyes Watch They sparkle Delighted At what they ...

This is a lovely poem, and beautifully written. Don't the best poems come during the middle of the night? That, and in the shower. :roll: Typical. I love it! ~Skye ...