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Good stuff! Brought back some memory-images there. Very nice stuff. Not much of a review. I'll come finish when I can.

I love this. I wonder- who is telling this to the boy? His conscience? His knowledge? common sense? And, the one telling him this- are they right? I love this. ...

I have no criticisms. It is perfect. Hopefully the judges will be as able to see it from the angle us writers do.

Nice job! The vote? At first I couldn't choose between the falcon and the stallion. Later I picked the stallion because Falcons are predators. Predators and Freedom don't really go ...

APOLOGY ACCEPTED. Don't be too hurt. I understand. Sometimes I overguilt myself.

I like it when people raise awareness for those in need.I love the Just Always Pray At Night.Take in mind whjat Snoink said.

This is sooooooooooo awesome. I love the bit where Nate says ''I'll try contact the YWS Commandos.'' ''I thought they did'nt exist!'' ''They don't.'' That is so awesome. Like you.

O.......M.............G! This is the best of your works I have seen so far. I love the way Snoink gave you a pink ship even though you said specifically NOT to.

Awesome. Looking forward to your next posts.

I love it. I can't wait to see what comes in your next fanfic! If you ever decide to make it a movie, I'm a good actress.....

Awesome job! I feel the - emotions rushing through me. The only problem I found was how you kept writing very long sentences like this which is quite awkward to ...

cool! I can see the dancer dancing!

So sweet/sad. I love the way you pretend to be someone else and just write these beautiful works. Maybe I'll try writing in this forum sometime...

I usually oppose stories like this (about murder and suicide and that) but nice job. I like the idea of black roses.

Love it. I am in awe.