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Re: Balloons
I love this. Didn't see any errors. Good story. We didn't get much information for the relationship between Josh and the girl but we didn't need any, the information we ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Princess And The Stones, chapter 3
Nice job!I find Petah annoyingly amusing. His stupidity is crazy. How can someone so stupid be so handsome? Or.....maybe he's so stupid BECAUSE he's so handsome. Or at least to ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Mental Scars
I love this. The 'lies' pic was real good. The mask one was my favourite. I like how one of her eyes is in the holes of the mask, the ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Dextra
Pure brilliance. I usually pick literary artworks for the title and undertitle without really noticing who the author is until I click on it. I LOVE how you start your ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: deleted
This touches me. Your poem truly defines most of the people at school I know. The ones that tease me anyway. I truly understand every line. Yes! it is like ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
I have seen this featured SO MANY TIMES and I have finally decided to read it. It is awesome. Honestly, I have never seen anything featured more than two or ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: To Kill A Unicorn [1/2]
I agree that there should be a reason that the unicorn is bothersome. I am in one of my faerie-tale modes, because I have recently heard a beautiful song called ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: all these tangled thorns
LOVE IT. Nice job, Jaggs! Love the title, the words, the emotions and basically everything else. It has alot of mystery as well......I have no idea what your intentions were ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: If I Were a DC Writer [NOW AVAILABLE ON ITUNES]
I love it so much. I wish- a great many things. I have a lovely voice (sorry for bragging, but how else are you supposed to know?) but I find ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: The Completely Evil Radio Show Script
Please make a story like that and include me? I can be evil........or insane..........or a bunny rabbit! (I'm kidding about the rabbit one) YOU ARE SO AWESOME. Seriously. Maybe we ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Light and dark.
Good. Needs a bit of work though. Maybe check out my poems for ideas. You might learn something. You need to use descriptive words and deep meaning. Get people to ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Powerless
I read your poem. My heart pounds. I feel....nothing. I honestly feel empty, even physically, and I feel icy in moderate temperature. It takes a true writer to do that. ...
Jan 27, 2011
