Sionarama

Dear skutter11, I love how you reapet that one phrase! Also, you should call this poem "To Be A Kite"

Interesting! I couldn't figure out what the Sickness was. And it was cool it was love! It's very thought provoking! :lol:

Wow! I have a few questions: Is Violet a ghost? What is the strange mark? Where is everybody? I can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG!!! So twisted... I LOVE it!

Amazing work!!! I LOVE the ending!! In the beginning, The sentence She groaned as she lifted it off the moving truck, moving... I like except for the 2 movings. You ...

Dear wiggy1 this piece of writing is so heart felt! I love the emotions you release and the phrase ...The blood red roses...! ~sionarama

You used too many The man to begin your sentences. What type of creature is Dobliv? What does "The man" want"? I like Lord of the Rings type of stories. ...

Interesting.... You use to many ands. Also, you should spell it instead of putting &. I would also like to know the background. Where is Tala from? Who is the ...

A little short, don't you think? This type of poem is called a haiku.

Dear Cheesy, interesting.... though I think you should expand on it a bit. Is Caroline the assassin? Why is she crying? Is Carla dead? Overall I believe you have an ...

Kaywiia, This poem makes me miss summer. I love the repetition though I think it needs more similes. Peace!

Thanks for all the comments!

I love the moral! I give you three-four stars!

Dear peeps, Thanks for your comments! Also, how did you guys get those pictures?

I loved it!!! Great imaginative writing, suspence, and characters. Where is the dad? Why does the mom hate Candice's problem? Maybe from personal history *hint*? Rock on and keep writing!