Sionarama

I disagree with Elinor, somewhat. It was definitely rushed, and could use some proper punctuation, but I think it was a fun read. It's very lighthearted, and I don't think ...

As always your writing is wonderful to read. You've also come quite a way in credibility too, becasue I didn't see any of those unrealistic reactions like in the early ...

I love love love LOVE this!!!! You have accurately made all four show/movies hilarious by connecting them! I have never seen twilight but I can guess what's going on. Could ...

I agree with Miss Snoink over there! Your MC (main character) is portrayed in a rather feminine manner. And when I heard the name Zane, I knew it was a ...

Good job Allie! it was an interesting story and I can't wait for the other parts. You got me confused with some of the passages. You kept switching from italics ...

OMG!! Amazing!! Superb!! This poem is great and should be published as a children's book. I can just see Roberto and his mother and how he slips from the pantry ...

[i]\ His helpful companion - a simple stick - kissed the cobble for every staggered stride. . i really like this piece! It was a simple, nostalgic way to write ...

"Corey, Corey!" I liked this piece! You used an interesting way to write your story though I'm confused about who the Thing is. Is it her conciens? Oh well. I ...

Wait a second!! Is that you?? Anyway, I love your stories so much I'm addicted to them like coffee! You should write them and publish them. They'll be a hit! ...

Prologue He didn’t look anything like she expected. great begining! Her mother had told her about the guy that was coming to train her but she had no idea he’d ...

[/quote] “Our Lady of Tara!” gasped Fiona, her hand going to mouth. Her eyes were wide with amazement as she observed the fortune lady. We walked forward, oblivious of the ...

Good job Christian! I'll also be your reviewer. I hope I made your day! This is a great poem and I loved the rhymes. Great imagery and I like the ...

I liked your story. It's not a very original topic but you made it your own. Kudos!!! Your story leaves me hanging. I love this!! I hope you can write ...

Coolio! You should spell out numbers and not change tences... I would like a descript of Josh and more of Yourself..... where's the mom? work? What time is it? These ...

My angel above my shoulder, My angel above my head. My angel by my window, I'd like it more if you put above instead of by . the by interupts ...