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That's totally fair enough, I got that impression from the chapter on the whole really, so that's completely understandable. I just remember her seeming al mysterious and stuff in her ...

Thanking you :P It's a relief that you're not finding the hints about Preston super obvious, but also not needlessly vague because I always worry about my balance with that. ...

It was my pleasure :) Aw really? That's super interesting!

Ah, I see, that does all make a lot more sense now. I'd assumed she was packed in the middle of the queue or something, for some reason. I think ...

Haha, no worries!

It wasn't letting me reply to your reply, so take this as my reply to, err, that! The car key thing makes total sense, and it's certainly hardly detrimental to ...

That's crazy :o Now I feel really old!

hihi, ty, love u longtime. You're right on the aura reaction thing, I need to tweak that. The idea is that whoever's trying to read Felix's aura sees nothing, and ...

Thanking you! :3 Psht, of course you were helpful. I totally agree with you on Felix not really asking about what he did hen he blacked out because that's so ...

Hm, okay, I get ya. It's definitely true that revealing information this way is more interesting than the typical telling us in the narrative way, so I certainly don't disagree ...

Hahaha oh god, I really need to remove all traces of this stuff from YWS. But hey, you enjoyed it overall, so I'm not complaining :P Thanks for the feedback, ...

Please, I know everything. Might be having hallucinations, but I think I reviewed the beginning of it.

Of course, I'll try to take a look tomorrow. Oh, and as you're new, welcome to YWS!

Thanks muchly for your feedback :) Even though Carmen says that, it isn't what she really thinks (or least that's the idea anyway!) Oh, and thanks for noting that typo, ...

Thanks for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed! Haha, as it's the 8th chapter and you still enjoyed it, it can't be a bad thing :P