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Yeah, I know. Don't get me wrong, I know that deep down, Chase was never really a complete jerk. What I meant by my review was I think Punky could ...

Ah... Okay! :) Thanks for explaining, kaka. Be sure to mention the thing about the schooling sometime during the beginning of the novel, otherwise it could get a bit confusing ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! Like usual, they've been loads of help. :) @Tanya - Thanks for pointing that out for me. I knew there was something dodgy about that ...

Hey point! I'm here to review the rest of this for you! Can I suggest something though first? For people who may be following this novel, because you posted the ...

Thanks for all of the reviews, guys. :) @Tanya - I think I'm going to write the next chapter of this, but if I do what I originally intended to ...

Ah! That makes sense now you've explained it. I love the idea, by the way. :P I know what you mean. A lot of writers struggle to make sure that ...

You pointed out the exact words I'd expected to be pointed out, baywolf! xD As for those words, they are British ones that are both English and Welsh. Ta = ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! You have no idea how much they help. :D @Tanya - I'm glad you're liking this so far. It's always great to hear your opinion ...

I is a perv. :D I'm going to warn you in advance that I think this will only be a nit-pick review because I've basically given you my overall opinion ...

Sorry if this sounds repetitive, but thanks so much for the reviews :) They really help me out and they're especially helpful now that I'm editing what I have of ...

Thanks for all of the reviews, guys. :) @ Shubhi - I thought about what you said and edited the mother into this chapter a bit. I've also tkaen into ...

Thank you guys so much for all of the reviews. They genuinely help me so much! :D hehe... I can't thank you enough... xD

Thanks for all of the reviews, guys :) @Seeminglymeaningless - You deserve a medal for your reviews. :P I'm certainly going to recommend The Four Musketeers to other people in ...

Hey again :D I'm not here to review the first chapter right now, but I will promise you that it will be done by tomorrow. I no longer have any ...

Warning... this is kind of long, Seeminglymeaningless: Thanks for the reviews! After reading over the chapters, I realised that I hadn't edited them at all. I could have sworn that ...